Dead Towers Chaos

When the fire burned
inside the artificial fire,
and hate was hated
 further than ever,
even love hid ...

Peace was surprised
and without faith it burned everyone
at the same time.

The powder has calcined
in anything else but dust...
  the sky fell.
The chaos shocked itself ...
and what was left of us? ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.
Poetry Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Delighted by your words friend poet! I send my fraternal embrace and friendship ... alkas
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Hello Alakas, a fire out of control is very dangerous to evryone that have to leave their homes. I feel sorry for the animals that live in the forest. That is their home burning out of control. When the sky falls no one knows what will happen to us. Salute Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Hello Alakas, when the forest burns, the animals have no where to go. That is why it is so sad. Salute Darlene.Enjoy your day .Darlene.
Poetry Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:49 AM
Exactly dear ! imagine THEN How It was when Forest burns, the suffering is terrível ! salute AND have a Nice day, alkas
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