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Dead Towers Chaos

When the fire burned inside the artificial fire, and hate was hated further than ever, even love hid ... Peace was surprised and without faith it burned everyone at the same time. The powder has calcined in anything else but dust... the sky fell. The chaos shocked itself ... and what was left of us? ...

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:36:00 PM

Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/28/2021 3:46:00 AM

Delighted by your words friend poet! I send my fraternal embrace and friendship ... alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/26/2021 12:30:00 PM

Hello Alakas, a fire out of control is very dangerous to evryone that have to leave their homes. I feel sorry for the animals that live in the forest. That is their home burning out of control. When the sky falls no one knows what will happen to us. Salute Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2021 10:33:00 AM

Hello Alakas, when the forest burns, the animals have no where to go. That is why it is so sad. Salute Darlene.Enjoy your day .Darlene.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/28/2021 3:49:00 AM

Exactly dear ! imagine THEN How It was when Forest burns, the suffering is terrível ! salute AND have a Nice day, alkas