Dead Sorry

He felt a presence, reeled around;
his breathing was the only sound,
but then the whispers stopped his heart.
'You know we shouldn't be apart.'
He gulped - a hand upon his back! -
and then his spinning world was black.

He woke to sunshine in the room -
no hint of last night's former gloom -
and written on the floor in dust:
'You broke my heart and broke my trust.'
He spoke aloud and hoped she'd hear:
'I'm sorry', Yes, he felt her near.

He wished he hadn't killed her now
but anger blinds him in a row.
Her body buried in the yard,
he dug it up, heart beating hard.
Just bones remained. He said, 'Oh, Joyce -'
and swallowed as he heard her voice.

'You're mine forever more,' she cried.
The grave was open, gaping wide -
and sobbing, praying, there he died...


for Robert's Paranormal contest
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Shaw Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 3:15 PM
Gripping, Jack, loved the title too, there's a undying moral in this grave somewhere . . . ; )
Peck Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 9:03 PM
That is one scary story! So, guys, don't kill your wives :)
Callus Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Excellent, Jack... both the title and content of the poem itself. Dark and eerie, right to the very end! ~ Regards // paul
Laurie Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Hello Jack ... really well written with nice flowing lines and good rhyme. Seems like his conscience stopped his heart beating - thank you Jack - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Now there's a scary midnight tale, for us to keep and tell, but you said it so well, it is a certain win I feel, revenge for you she did reveal. very well penned my friend - your poems are so versatile and you have the talent to make any write humorous. A Happy Christmas to you Jack, be well, love your writes. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Goff Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 9:22 PM
Sheesh Jack! a fine scare!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Oh yeah! Revenge from the grave.
Calasibetta Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:54 PM
An eerie story indeed....cleverly crafted and definitely a winner in the contest. Blessings, Paulette
Ball Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 3:50 PM
Ooohoo! If this isn't a winner for Robert it sure is for me. Excellent. God Bless, JB
Awtry Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 7:55 AM
I like the way this dark tale unfolded! Great story telling! -ps
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Reads like a strong contender for the contest. Too many ID documentaries. Way to go. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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