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Dead Reckoning

~ Black as the pit in the well of my dreams slumber is dark, and the silence is long on the loneliest road that the mind travels on I'm engulfed by the pitch and the feeling of dread Dead reckoning beckons to hold up its head I'm encircled by whirlwinds and fierce prairie wind I open my eyes, and with the last of my breath I see a field of tall wheat, I am gasping within My grandmother's house is a waving mirage and seen in the distance, as once it had been What do I fear? Is it life after death? Perchance this is slumber, and the sleep monster haunts me, A nightmare is taunting as it calls through the dark I am playing the part, as a child with a spark of the fire that wants me, as the field is engulfed Heroic, and fearless, alas, not afraid An arm reaches out, and shows me the way Keeping brave as I can, she lends me her hand "Stand by my side, let the flames be your guide" How brave, that I am, when deep in the place in the trace of the vaporous face of my dreams The shades of fire, and smoke of the night will consume me, if only, I fight off my fright It is only my fear, that consumes while awake of the things that are real, and things that are not Not bending wheat strands, or the flames of the fire Standing tall when I wake, I will wake with new power __________________________________________________ 1//5/14

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Date: 1/9/2014 7:11:00 PM
wow, what a cool dream poem this is. The very first part, before you added the fire, put me in mind of that famous picture of a girl sitting in a field in front of an old farmhouse landscape. I would sure rate this one high if I were Poetess Darkly!!
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Date: 1/6/2014 8:07:00 AM
And this is how it is DONE! Those last 2 lines resound with such powerful focus & resolve. Incredibly done, Carrie. Happy New Year. =)
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Date: 1/6/2014 12:08:00 AM
Wow you have a nack with your work to take the reader on adventures, this was sad and fearful but yet it had a powerful message to it also. nice work here cheri
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Date: 1/5/2014 7:27:00 PM
This is an awesome dream of empowerment my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem here this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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