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Dead Or Alive

She wouldn't notice if i was drunk She wouldn't know if i was high She wouldn't care if i had cuts on my thigh She doesn't want me around She wouldn't want me Dead or alive So why wait till death while im alive

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/13/2016 7:46:00 PM

Such is life. Good write.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/29/2016 10:43:00 AM

Plenty of fish in the ocean, eh. Good for you. daver

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 2:26:00 AM

Adam Taylor, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2016 11:20:00 PM

Adam, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Adam Taylor
Date: 3/20/2016 11:33:00 PM

Thank you linda i will let you know if i need anything at all i really enjoyed the pirates bay haiku that you put up.