Dead Guilt

"The waking light,
 Finds a missing man
And her wailing ending
Yet the tears still ran.

She trails her sobs
Down her stair
Across daylight pubs
To what Sunny shares

Underprivileged Sunny’s getting a bit 
Gloomy
But Sunny’s gloomy getting a bit
Boring for Girl-”

*Sigh*
“Right at the spine
I felt the bones crunch beneath the
Bloody tires of mine.

And these sobs 
And rain
And blood
Down the drain”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Wow. Powerful. Babii (Name For Friends Lol Sorrii) Im Right Here With You. Peace <3 Boo Boo
Strand Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 11:58 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Saidah .Rgds Brian
Langston-Moran Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 10:18 AM
I hope I am not driving you crazy..but I am reading all your poetry and I have to comment. It seems you have had a very interesting and possibley traumatic life..Patricia
Megens Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 10:08 AM
sad my friend but theres hope dont give in to grief just remorse and live on
Shango Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Tragedy ... can be as sudden as the rain .... for what is our life but a gift dangling on a thread of faith ... a good poem.
Riddle Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 4:24 PM
hmm... very interesting poem of saddness
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