Dead Giveaway

He threaded a hand through her long blonde hair

She shifted from one foot to stand entranced

Their eyes locked together, a constant stare

Grey/green eyes, his sensuous lips enticed

Everything changed within, soul sacrificed

As she pressed both hands to her cheeks

Could such a love develop within weeks

Her heart and mind in a constant turmoil

Smiling, a knowing louche grinning he leaks

Burst bubble, releasing doubt to uncoil


Date 23/9/20
Dizain Contest
Sponsor Emile Pinet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Leffanta Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Well said! That's all that un-does it! Aloha! Rico
Stephens Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 1:15 AM
Thank you for reading and your kind comment
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