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Dead Flowers

Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave, Decaying are the flowers in your vase; So I have placed new roses by your grave. Memories wash over wave after wave, I left you encased in satin and lace; Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave. My soul has lost what I hoped it could save, Inanimate tokens have filled your place; So I have placed new roses by your grave. My heart gave to you all it could have gave, Your life resembled perfection and grace; Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave. I willingly let love trap and enslave, Want not freedom from the bondage, in case; So I have placed new roses by your grave. Metaphorically these flowers they've, Resembled your soft body and warm face; Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave, So I have placed new roses by your grave. Written June 23rd 2016 For the Contest- Villanelle me a Flower or Flowers

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Date: 12/6/2016 6:32:00 PM
Very good job!
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Mike Jones
Date: 12/8/2016 9:53:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/10/2016 11:09:00 PM
MIKE, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Mike Jones
Date: 12/8/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/2/2016 5:24:00 AM
Wonderfully emotive take on the theme..loved it..congrats
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Mike Jones
Date: 7/2/2016 9:58:00 PM
Thank you James!
Date: 7/1/2016 6:35:00 PM
Sad and well written.
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Mike Jones
Date: 7/1/2016 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Tom.
Date: 7/1/2016 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations Mike, well done and most deserving...
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Mike Jones
Date: 7/1/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Date: 7/1/2016 10:29:00 AM
A very nice piece Mike. Well written.
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Mike Jones
Date: 7/1/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thanks James.
Date: 7/1/2016 9:40:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved top win!
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Mike Jones
Date: 7/1/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 6/30/2016 8:15:00 PM
Mike, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Mike Jones
Date: 6/30/2016 8:37:00 PM
Thank you very much.

Book: Shattered Sighs