Dead Flowers

Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave,
Decaying are the flowers in your vase;
So I have placed new roses by your grave.

Memories wash over wave after wave,
I left you encased in satin and lace;
Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave.

My soul has lost what I hoped it could save,
Inanimate tokens have filled your place;
So I have placed new roses by your grave.  

My heart gave to you all it could have gave,
Your life resembled perfection and grace;
Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave.

I willingly let love trap and enslave,
Want not freedom from the bondage, in case;
So I have placed new roses by your grave.

Metaphorically these flowers they've, 
Resembled your soft body and warm face;
Your beauty's now fading dark in a cave,
So I have placed new roses by your grave.

Written June 23rd 2016
For the Contest- Villanelle me a Flower or Flowers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Swank Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Very good job!
Jones Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Thank you!
A  Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 11:09 PM
MIKE, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
Jones Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Thank you!
James Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 5:24 AM
Wonderfully emotive take on the theme..loved it..congrats
Jones Avatar
July 2, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Thank you James!
Quigley Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Sad and well written.
Jones Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Thanks Tom.
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations Mike, well done and most deserving...
Jones Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Thank you Charlie.
Inman Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 10:29 AM
A very nice piece Mike. Well written.
Jones Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Thanks James.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Congrats on your well deserved top win!
Jones Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thank you Richard.
Scars Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 8:15 PM
Mike, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Jones Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thank you very much.
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