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Dead End Street

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Written: November 08, 2023, For John Lawless Contest Failure is a detour, not a dead-end street. Quote by Zig Ziglar
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Along an endless route leading to a dead-end Indigent, desolate, and deep in introspection Tires burning, cars swerving, and bouncing starkly Blindly suffering through a path of misery. Reporters recount recurrent repulsiveness. of men who murder, manslaughter, and menace rage, rape, robbery, and racketeering. Ridiculous! society sweats amid a status quo scandalous strain. I'm in circles of despair. Constant murderers must be naked. as a result of hitting a stalemate in life cease of sustenance, I'm alone. Life on a dead-end street was apathetic. when darkness casts fearful uncertainties a dead-end roadway with limited promise names lacking patterns are brought.   If vamoosed on a dead-end street? All despairing, detachedly deserted Follow your feelings and fulfill your soul. Bow gently if you don't realize the gang status.   You stroll the shattered street. You'll confront failure with bravery. In the city center, shadows play No matter what, the damaged street awaits. Life's fireballs and street flames ignite constantly. Obedient slaves to maliciousness feed malice. After the wheel runs, he gets rocks at the corner. Burning up, soaring, and yearning for the past; repeated rashness rasped reasons, perpetually My era loses. My era is losing track. The sign for Destruction Avenue is in sight the route is one I decline to choose.

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Date: 11/9/2023 5:26:00 AM
Wise words throughout, my friend. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/9/2023 1:23:00 AM
That is life. Evil is all around us. Great alliteration. Hopefully, murders are not the majority of evil. Otherwise, we would all be naked. Blessings.
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:02:00 PM
The meaning in this is very powerful. Everyone should read it.
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Date: 11/8/2023 6:16:00 PM
Great storytelling my friend and as always your words are so wise and profound and a pleasure to read.. you write so much and are so proficient in your poems... always captivating the reader...
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Date: 11/8/2023 2:43:00 PM
wisdom written so subtly within the words, images, and phrases of your poem, dearest Sotto. I felt the anguish of going down the metaphorical dead-end street. I dwelt in your words feeling the desperation, apathy, and failure that's inherent in such a journey. I especially liked the power in "life's fireballs and flames ignite constantly." I'm grateful for the hope and positivity in "the route is one I decline to take." Such bravery in doing so. I loved this one...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 11/8/2023 1:26:00 PM
A wonderful write/story. I love it. Good Luck... Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:10:00 PM
Such profound truths, so well woven, in so many parts of the world today we witness this, and you’ve written about all this and conveyed your deepest thoughts in such a poetic manner! I absolutely love so many lines in this especially “ Follow your feelings and fulfill your so” excellent advice there. And i love your use of alliterations and how you’ve paired words here too! Impeccable; this definitely is a very soul hitting eye opener, especially those last two lines! Hits deep! And strong.BOL
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