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---Dead Chipmunk

dead chipmunk
black cat’s doorstep gift---
exit shriek

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:21 PM

Debbie, another good haiku... my son loves this one... i had a cat who enjoyed pouring these dead chipmunks on my porch..yuk...lol..pd

Don Johnson

June 29, 2011 at 5:43 PM

I had a grey cat that delivered a rabbit, Smoky went wild in the Aussie bush. like your flow in this one:) xo, Don

Wandering Butterfly

June 29, 2011 at 8:33 AM

POOR chipmunk... :-) your haiku's are unbeatable...lol. Love, Randa

Judy Ball

June 26, 2011 at 5:45 PM

haha Very well done my friend. Reminds me of the gifts of love my cat used to bring me. We must remember that when our cat does something like this it's a gift of love and we must not hurt her feelings about it. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2011 at 2:19 PM

Yes, of course, my Lady is summer, and I was showing the three months of "her." WEll, when I go and do deep search, it asks for exact form and category and I cannot possibly remember all my poems and how I categorized them. I just don't see how you are using that search engine, Deb!!

Kash Poet

June 26, 2011 at 8:52 AM

Very nice..enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2011 at 8:45 AM

really cute. More themes on dead animals. I like it. soupmail.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 24, 2011 at 3:57 PM

I KNEW I should have asked u first about that darn word but looked it up online dictionary and this is what it showed but did not look or feel right to me.. same thing with seguey but Nette set me straight on that one.. I used to get 100's in spelling long time ago.. oh.. time marched on.. thankxx Debbie..