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Dead Palm Tree

9th march 2012, by : Sashi.Prabhu Form:Kimo(10,7,6) Vertical column of rotten dead wood, Without its green crown it stood, Dead palm tree understood. One tree standing in a distant field Poetry Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/13/2012 12:06:00 PM

Nicely written Kimo By you Sashi.I think there shouldn't be any end rhyming in a Kimo.

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/13/2012 12:09:00 PM

thanks Kash... Iwill learn that..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 12:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one about the poor dead palm tree, and thanks for the story of your dinner with your wife. So sweet.

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/11/2012 8:37:00 AM

thanks Andrea~~~~~~~sashi

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2012 4:14:00 PM

A great kimo, Sashi! If it's for the contest, I hope it does well. Thanks for all the wonderful comments and taking the time to read my writes today. Hope you have a great weekend. Blessings, Rhonda

Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/9/2012 8:59:00 PM

my first attempt at kimo.your words of encouragement are appreciated....thanks Rhonda and you too have a gr8 week end..~sashi