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Dazzling Show

As fresh snowflakes swirled out the azure sky, Snapshots of nature were such a delight. Mr. Winter sang songs and winked his eye, Covering the ground in a lovely white. Douglas Firs are adorned with nature's clothes. Mountain tops look dazzling this time of year. Then gentle winds roam the land in repose, Such a pleasant and serene atmosphere. Next, the sun sets and says hi to the moon, Then snow ascended on the ocean blue. They become one, flowing in perfect tune, As a colorful fish, were passing through. Nature puts on such a mind-blowing show. Just Viewing it will set your heart aglow. Alexis Y. 12-20-2020

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Date: 3/27/2024 7:41:00 PM
Perfect the visuals are stunning. Well done Pete.
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Date: 12/21/2020 11:58:00 AM
Your poetry is heartfelt my friend, it is warm and gentle and Nature does put on a mind-blowing show. I feel I have been so fortunate in my life - have seen beautiful landscapes in Britain, Greece, Zambia, the Ex Rhodesia, now Zimbabwe and of course our wondrous Rainbow Nation - South Africa. Nature brings peace of mind. An awesome poem my friend. Hugs and blessings,Jennifer.
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Date: 12/21/2020 9:50:00 AM
Your poetry alone sets my heart aglow, next to the real thing, poetry can be a big beautiful scene too. Thank you for sharing dear Alexis, have a wonderful Christmas full of love and peace xo
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Date: 12/21/2020 9:29:00 AM
Love this stunning lines. you are incredible. well done. a fav. Pete.
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Date: 12/21/2020 4:24:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Alexis... Great imagery and I loved the ending...
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Date: 12/21/2020 4:15:00 AM
Indeed a wonderful show in this beautiful winter poem. Such lovely images you created, Alexis--they dance merrily on your canvas!
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Date: 12/21/2020 1:48:00 AM
So very true. God created everything to perfection. Your description of winter is awesome. ~~
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Date: 12/20/2020 3:25:00 PM
Yes. For sure, nature puts on a show... God paints the earth with such a brilliant array of joyous sights and sounds that I have to P R A I S E Him with every breath! Your poem is a genuine truth - God bless you
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