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I'm fazed by your stunning, teeth exaltedness It's sumptuous when you show your sublimeness. You turned that rose branch like a rosebud softness. Betting finely on one's heart's splendidness. Moon is full, and my heart is whetted to your goodness. Your deep and allured ties spur love niceness. Your touch thrusts my spirit in a final motionless. Don't roar when you lam the sole soul weariness. Every single hymn in the sanctum is boundless.
Written: September 4, 2021

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Date: 9/5/2021 11:12:00 AM
You have achieved to write an extraordinary Monorhyme my friend, Lasaad. Stay safe!
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Date: 9/4/2021 10:12:00 PM
Wonderful monorhyme. Plus perfect imagery.
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Date: 9/4/2021 8:44:00 PM
Poem full of intriguing images...Delice
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Date: 9/4/2021 1:27:00 PM
Sumptuous, soft, sublime, exalting---I feel elated in the environment you describe, Lasaad. Keep your gift of joy dazzling.
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Date: 9/4/2021 1:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, your kindness is exceptional, and are comment is really motivating. Blessings and regards
Date: 9/4/2021 1:26:00 PM
Lovely lines rich in imagery, Lasaad. Your end rhymes are very interesting.
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Date: 9/4/2021 2:00:00 PM
Appreciate your insightful words and superb comment: blessings and kindest wishes.

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