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Dazzling Display of Sweetness

I'm fazed by your stunning, teeth exaltedness It's sumptuous when you show your sublimeness. You turned that rose branch like a rosebud softness. Betting finely on one's heart's splendidness. Moon is full, and my heart is whetted to your goodness. Your deep and allured ties spur love niceness. Your touch thrusts my spirit in a final motionless. Don't roar when you lam the sole soul weariness. Every single hymn in the sanctum is boundless.
Written: September 4, 2021
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Trifiatis Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 11:12 AM
You have achieved to write an extraordinary Monorhyme my friend, Lasaad. Stay safe!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:12 PM
Wonderful monorhyme. Plus perfect imagery.
Skelly Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Poem full of intriguing images...Delice
Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Sumptuous, soft, sublime, exalting---I feel elated in the environment you describe, Lasaad. Keep your gift of joy dazzling.
Poet Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, your kindness is exceptional, and are comment is really motivating. Blessings and regards
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Lovely lines rich in imagery, Lasaad. Your end rhymes are very interesting.
Poet Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Appreciate your insightful words and superb comment: blessings and kindest wishes.
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