Dazzling Day -Qd

Grudgingly, my eyes weaken their grip
Curtains rise up on a new morning
But no where’s my humble, grey front strip,
But Royal day with gems adorning.

Bright was the sun, yet it appeared not.
Stars shone in the day sky in all hues.
“These must be special fruit trees,” I thought,
“Each piece perfect, plump, nary a bruise.”

Grinning, He said, “Welcome to Heaven.”


September 26, 2019
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Allison Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:00 PM
such lovely lines Cindi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Beautiful verse, Cindi, congratulations on your win. Hugs
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October 19, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on your win, Cindi.
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Back to say congrats on your winning a place with your great poem!
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October 19, 2019 at 7:50 AM
A lovely write Cindi. I'm sure the gates will be open when time comes. Hopefully not for a while (lol) Loved this poem. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie
Awtry Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 12:46 AM
What a day that will be! :)
One Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 2:52 PM
nice... lovely imagery..
Michael Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 12:40 PM
“Welcome to Heaven.” We were expecting you....Nice one Cindi
Mcgee Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Nice images in your poem. GL in the contest.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Heaven will be amazing for sure... Wonderful poem. Best for the contest. Blessings
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