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Dazzle at the deep Field Cash prize Poetry Contest

Sponsor Gregorey Richard Barden

13/10/2025

Dazzled

Beyond our world in outer space
Would I then find another place?
Toward it would I creep or race?
Without pre-conceived ideas
Yet expecting mysteries.

With no restraints quite free to find
Inquisitive desires bind.
Hurry before I change my mind.
Let me trust my inner voice.
To go beyond, is my choice.

When I get there, what will I see?
All I imagined it to be.
This universal mystery
Hoping, I will ‘see the light.’
Knowing I will be all right.

Excited by this vision seen.
I wonder if it is a dream.
But no! this sight is so supreme.
Secrets revealed to mankind
Quintessential force aligned.

To beauty in the dark beyond
Is up to us how we respond.
United in a common bond
Kaleidoscopic colours
This galaxy of wonders.

Yet, all this time these mysteries were mine!
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October 28, 2025 at 6:55 PM
Dear Christine, congratulations for your success in Gregory’s contest with your inspiring poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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