Daytime's Demeanor

Free verse to Rhyme Royal

Daytime’s Demeanor

This morning the water is,
glass still, an indigo mirror.
Shyly it reflects each hill, each lofty palm,
a soft collage of orange clouds.

Time now, to summon thoughts, delineate them,
confess faults, spill forth, a profusion
of memories, immersed in reverie.

Slowly, as clouds disperse, the day begins to pulse.
As ripples, eventually distort the river
I stir, myself.

Time now, for me to assume, day-time’s demeanor.
Like any cloud or tree, be buffered
by whatever comes along.

 Suzanne Delaney




Daytime’s Demeanor

This morning the river is glassy-still.
Its surface a collage of orange clouds,
of lofty palms, and every nearby hill.
And I, immersed in reverie away from crowds
Summon thoughts, confessing faults, to spill
a profusion of reflected memories
Mirrored to de-lineate in reverie.

As day begins to pulse and clouds disperse
Ripples from unruly winds distort the river
I stir myself, day’s journey to traverse
Preparing for what day's events are likely to deliver
Like any cloud or tree that Nature buffers
No longer to remain a simple  dreamer
Time now to wrap myself in Daytime’s Demeanor.

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Hi Suzanne, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 1:50 PM
Great winning work..Congrats on your great placement..Sara
Oyewole Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Big Congrats~A.O
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Way to go Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Richard So glad to have you visit. SuZ
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Just a wonderful morph and I like the new version even better. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Delaney Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Thanks for the honor Debbie A fun contest...looking at a subject in a new light...brilliant luvSuz
May Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 11:43 AM
wonderful rewrite Suzanne...congrats on your win...love
Delaney Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 1:27 PM
So appreciated, Joseph SuZ
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:10 AM
Many congratulations Susanne luv , well done
Richards Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 9:18 AM
There is such a peaceful sense to these beautiful poems......both of them! One can't help but feel the reverie in each verse. Love them! Congratulations!!
Delaney Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:49 AM
So glad you enjoyed the transformation.
Esquire Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Dear P, S-N, Xegrakio, SuZ, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. If this is for the Metaphor Contest:Congratulations as I am sure YOU will be in the Winners circle.I agree with PD, I like the second one more. Great Pen I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Loyal S-P,POET...HG
A   Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 2:33 PM
ooo wow! I love the second style on this poem. sending soup mail...PD
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