Sanford Weir Poet Quatrain

Daystar Rising In Your Heart

When you feel the daystar rising in your heart...

It is time for negativity to depart...

When you are enveloped in love...

You received a divine gift from above...

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Deepak Srivastava October 16, 2018 at 5:48 AM Your poem indicates that daystar clears the cobweb of all wrongs and love is a divine gift.excellent composition

Daisy Tyrrell October 9, 2018 at 5:27 AM so short yet full of hope x Sanford Weir October 9, 2018 at 8:50 AM Daisy, Thank you for your comment on my Daystar poem. I do believe "where your attention goes your energy flows".

Caren Krutsinger October 7, 2018 at 8:13 AM A wonderful hopeful quatrain my friend. Sanford Weir October 9, 2018 at 8:49 AM Caren, I appreciate your comment on my Daystar poem. I do strive for optimism in life.