DAYSTAR

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Aug. 10,2024 5.19pm

Devotional devotees dazzlingly delight At an amazing aurora’s star of abiding light; You’re yawl-like year-round of Yahweh’s areole-sight, Starlight of sunshine, starlight in splendid night, Twinkling tirelessly ‘til the thickest tip of twilight; Ardent acclamations in our hearts arise…alight, Reuniting us in rejoicing with reverence in thy rite!

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Tom Woody

Date: 8/13/2024 6:03:00 AM

This is a unique take. Let's hope the sponsor agrees.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 9:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem my dear poet friend and your uplifting words. She did not agree with it,beyond requirement is one of the reasons perhaps like acrostic but I included 2 other forms. An experiment but your comments along with the 2 other poets are nice consolations for me, a delightful win, Thank you so much. God bless you always and your writings, Hugs

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/12/2024 1:00:00 PM

Omg!!! I LOVE this... how you've included alliteration as well as acrostic! Amazing and beautiful Len! Faving! Xo

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 9:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading and loving this poem my dear poet friend Crystol. An experimentation of putting actually 3-in 1, acrostic, alliteration and monoryhme. Thank you so much for the fave and your very uplifting comment. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2024 9:39:00 PM

wow, acrostic and alliteration in one, len! this is creatively formed with shining images...hope to connect with you through fb...huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 8/12/2024 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet and friend Nette. God bless you always and your writings. I'm going to soupie you now.