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Aug. 10,2024     5.19pm

DAYSTAR


Devotional devotees dazzlingly delight
At an amazing aurora’s star of abiding light;
You’re yawl-like year-round of Yahweh’s areole-sight,
Starlight of sunshine, starlight in splendid night,
Twinkling tirelessly ‘til the thickest tip of twilight; 
Ardent acclamations in our hearts arise…alight,
Reuniting us in rejoicing with reverence in thy rite!
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Woods Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 1:00 PM
Omg!!! I LOVE this... how you've included alliteration as well as acrostic! Amazing and beautiful Len! Faving! Xo
Gasun Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Thank you so much for reading and loving this poem my dear poet friend Crystol. An experimentation of putting actually 3-in 1, acrostic, alliteration and monoryhme. Thank you so much for the fave and your very uplifting comment. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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August 11, 2024 at 9:39 PM
wow, acrostic and alliteration in one, len! this is creatively formed with shining images...hope to connect with you through fb...huggs
Gasun Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet and friend Nette. God bless you always and your writings. I'm going to soupie you now.
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