Daystar

Desolate life wanders in wanton wasteland in the dark
Assigned path for me I no longer can find, search in vain
Yearn with devout dedication God’s benevolent light
Seek its shine on me with the glow of His thousand suns
Transform at night into the shimmering star to guide me
Awakened by His gracious kindness I find way inward
Recognize in soul a lotus bloom with the sheen of His star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hawley Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Lots of colorful descriptions in your poem. Great job and congrats!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 9:44 AM
Thank you for the placement
Jones Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 12:15 AM
Love the ending line most!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 12:25 AM
Thank you.
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