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Daystar

Desolate life wanders in wanton wasteland in the dark Assigned path for me I no longer can find, search in vain Yearn with devout dedication God’s benevolent light Seek its shine on me with the glow of His thousand suns Transform at night into the shimmering star to guide me Awakened by His gracious kindness I find way inward Recognize in soul a lotus bloom with the sheen of His star

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Date: 8/18/2024 7:01:00 AM
Lots of colorful descriptions in your poem. Great job and congrats!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/18/2024 9:44:00 AM
Thank you for the placement
Date: 8/7/2024 12:15:00 AM
Love the ending line most!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/10/2024 12:25:00 AM
Thank you.

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