Daystar

Delighted under your light, Amazing to see you shining Yes, I am grateful to see the Stars, the souls of our lost ones Touching us with tenderness~ Above, where we all will bright Replete with the searched love

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/17/2024 3:36:00 PM

Hello Maria, I have never thought of stars that way. For me it is something to polnder. Love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2024 12:17:00 PM

Hello Maria, yes there are other ways to think about things..Enjoy your day my friend. Love, /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/18/2024 1:15:00 AM

Good morning Darlene. It's always other ways to think about things, I suppose. Thank you my dear friend. I hope you have a lovely Sunday.!

Valsa George

Date: 8/8/2024 10:58:00 PM

Love the comparison of stars as the souls of our departed dear ones. They shed light for us from above. Enjoyed reading your lovely acrostic, dear Maria.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/10/2024 12:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Valsa for your kind words. Have a blessed day.!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/3/2024 1:00:00 AM

Amazing acrostic. Loved it. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/4/2024 1:58:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear Victor. I hope you are doing well. I've been disconected at the farm, (my auntie and cousin's home). Just a break. It was really nice to be in contact with nature and help my aunt to do some chores. It's hot here, nights are better. I send you my love. Blessings.!

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/2/2024 11:18:00 PM

so beautiful and touching words, enjoyed yann

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/3/2024 12:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, Yann. I hope you are enjoying summer. Blessings.!