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Daystar

 Delighted under your light,
 Amazing to see you shining
 Yes, I am grateful to see the
 Stars, the souls of our lost ones
 Touching us with tenderness~
 Above, where we all will bright
 Replete with the searched love

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Darlene De Beaulieu

August 17, 2024 at 3:36 PM

Hello Maria, I have never thought of stars that way. For me it is something to polnder. Love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 18, 2024 at 12:17 PM

Hello Maria, yes there are other ways to think about things..Enjoy your day my friend. Love, /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 18, 2024 at 1:15 AM

Good morning Darlene. It's always other ways to think about things, I suppose. Thank you my dear friend. I hope you have a lovely Sunday.!

Valsa George

August 8, 2024 at 10:58 PM

Love the comparison of stars as the souls of our departed dear ones. They shed light for us from above. Enjoyed reading your lovely acrostic, dear Maria.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 10, 2024 at 12:41 AM

Thank you so much Valsa for your kind words. Have a blessed day.!

Victor Buhagiar

August 3, 2024 at 1:00 AM

Amazing acrostic. Loved it. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 4, 2024 at 1:58 PM

Thank you very much my dear Victor. I hope you are doing well. I've been disconected at the farm, (my auntie and cousin's home). Just a break. It was really nice to be in contact with nature and help my aunt to do some chores. It's hot here, nights are better. I send you my love. Blessings.!