Daystar

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This Acrostic Or That Acrostic Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Miranda Hawley. Date written: 07/29/2024

Drying up raindrops on window panes, Accumulations of wet puddles in spring. Yielding ample ripe fruits of hope on Saturnine days; adding a touch of warmth To frigid-cold winter, to the autumn breeze, And ushering in halcyon days of summer. Radiant sun, shining bright through the seasons

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Valsa George

Date: 8/23/2024 12:28:00 AM

What a lovely tribute to the daystar. It dries up raindrops, puddles, adds warmth to cold days, ripens fruits et al. Imagine a day with the daystar completely veiled. Such a day will be so dull. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2024 8:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and the congratulations, Valsa:-)

Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/19/2024 8:14:00 AM

A trip through all the seasons, very nice. Congrats on your win in my contest.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2024 8:18:00 AM

Thank you very much for your feedback and my placement, Miranda:-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/30/2024 12:12:00 PM

So well written, Edward! I love the way you take the "daystar" "through the seasons." Your lines are so lyrical. They flow from one season to the next almost unnoticed just like the seasons do! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings for every season to you!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2024 11:54:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sam:-) I'm glad you loved this one, my friend.