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Daystar

Days hold the sun And many wonderful Yawns Stars twinkling will be held Tonight by the sky And moon Rising over the mountain top

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/21/2024 6:01:00 PM

Good job and congratulations on your HM in my contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2024 11:19:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my acrostic "Daystar" write for your fun contest. Thank You for having this fun contest/for my placement. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 8:59:00 AM

"Honorable Mention" ~ Daystar ~ Date written: 7/26/2024

Len Gasun

Date: 8/17/2024 9:57:00 PM

Coming back to enjoy again this gem and say Congratulations on your win my dearest poet friend! Have a great day! Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2024 8:58:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my acrostic "Daystar" write again. It is great to see you back here. "Thanks" This weekend is a full moon with pretty nights. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/17/2024 6:26:00 PM

What simplicity. That's nature for you - attending to their tasks the sun and moon and stars lighten our lives like no other. I like line 3 for Yawns are sign of old age, of which I am experiencing with de"light." Congrats on a fine acrostic.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2024 8:55:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my acrostic "Daystar" write. I love the sky. This weekend is a full moon with pretty nights. I needed a "Y" word so I went with Yawns. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Len Gasun

Date: 7/28/2024 7:44:00 PM

Brilliant acrostic my dearest poet friend. I love it's hopeful message. I like this a lot. Best wishes always! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2024 8:50:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my acrostic "Daystar" write to be a Brilliant acrostic. I enjoyed writing this one. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Eve Roper

Date: 7/28/2024 9:12:00 AM

I love this verse, ( also for a child's book :)) Good luck my friend

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2024 8:48:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Good luck. Glad you love my acrostic "Daystar" write. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/27/2024 12:50:00 PM

This acrostic comes alive with your poetic touch.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 9:03:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to have a poetic touch. I enjoyed writing this acrostic "Daystar." Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 9:20:00 AM

Beautiful acrostic! Love how youv written for the word, i especially love “ stars twinkling will be held the b the sky and moon” how dreamy and hopeful. Best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 8:59:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my write to be a Beautiful acrostic. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2024 1:46:00 PM

Good one using the word. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 8:58:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my acrostic write. Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Silent One

Date: 7/26/2024 12:40:00 PM

Excellent acrostic...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2024 8:56:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be an Excellent acrostic. That makes me happy... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/26/2024 11:31:00 AM

Hello Paula, I enjoy the mornings with the sunshine and the clouds. i ahave always enjoyed the clouds. I enjoy the evening when the moon full or not comes out with the stars. I choose the brightest star and make a wish upon it. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2024 11:33:00 AM

Hello Paula, Your welcome. There are evening s when i do not see the stars. i like to see the stars and moon. Full moon or half.moon. Enjoy to write away. /Darlene / Hugs./ Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2024 12:19:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Yes, I love the sky & everything in it. We just had a pretty full moon. Some nights the stars are so bright. Hugs.... Have a blessed day writing away...........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2024 9:47:00 AM

Daystar ~ Date written: 7/26/2024