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Daystar

Daystar, you warm and comfort me,
And cheer me up - fill my heart with glee.
You're my hero up so high, 
Shining light so we all can see, 
The source of all earth's energy,
Always there, so dependably,
Really good for a circle in the sky.

Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2024

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Reason A. Poteet Date: 8/17/2024 6:17:00 PM Easy read is right and a bit of humor. I like the simplicity and truth intertwined. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/17/2024 9:52:00 PM Thanks Reason - I appreciate it!

Miranda Hawley Date: 8/17/2024 5:09:00 PM This poem made the winners circle because it is a super easy read, and your last line was pretty good. Congrats on this winning entry in my contest. Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/17/2024 5:24:00 PM Thanks for the specific, positive feedback, Miranda - I enjoyed writing it!

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/25/2024 11:03:00 PM This is a deLIGHTful poem. Enjoy the sunshine. Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 8/17/2024 5:24:00 PM Haha, thanks Hilda!

thriveni c mysore Date: 7/25/2024 7:41:00 PM Delightful acrostic dear poet. Happy writing. Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 7/25/2024 10:23:00 PM Thanks Thriveni! :-) :-)

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 7/25/2024 6:14:00 AM Hello David, I enjoyed your Acrostic, a sort of ode to the sun. Growing up, we used to sing songs in Sunday school about God, our Daystar!! Good luck in the contest. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Login to Reply David Crandall Date: 7/25/2024 9:20:00 AM Glad you enjoyed it Daniel. Believe it or not, I was not even familiar with the term "daystar" and had to google it. It makes sense, though, the star that you can see during the day.