David Crandall Poet Acrostic

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7/24/2024 for This Acrostic or That Acrostic Poetry Contest

Daystar

Daystar, you warm and comfort me,
And cheer me up - fill my heart with glee.
You're my hero up so high, 
Shining light so we all can see, 
The source of all earth's energy,
Always there, so dependably,
Really good for a circle in the sky.

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Reason A. Poteet August 17, 2024 at 6:17 PM Easy read is right and a bit of humor. I like the simplicity and truth intertwined. Congrats on your win. David Crandall August 17, 2024 at 9:52 PM Thanks Reason - I appreciate it!

Miranda Hawley August 17, 2024 at 5:09 PM This poem made the winners circle because it is a super easy read, and your last line was pretty good. Congrats on this winning entry in my contest. David Crandall August 17, 2024 at 5:24 PM Thanks for the specific, positive feedback, Miranda - I enjoyed writing it!

Hilda Greenhough July 25, 2024 at 11:03 PM This is a deLIGHTful poem. Enjoy the sunshine. David Crandall August 17, 2024 at 5:24 PM Haha, thanks Hilda!

thriveni c mysore July 25, 2024 at 7:41 PM Delightful acrostic dear poet. Happy writing. David Crandall July 25, 2024 at 10:23 PM Thanks Thriveni! :-) :-)

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 25, 2024 at 6:14 AM Hello David, I enjoyed your Acrostic, a sort of ode to the sun. Growing up, we used to sing songs in Sunday school about God, our Daystar!! Good luck in the contest. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel David Crandall July 25, 2024 at 9:20 AM Glad you enjoyed it Daniel. Believe it or not, I was not even familiar with the term "daystar" and had to google it. It makes sense, though, the star that you can see during the day.