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Day's Work

The creature banked furiously, slamming his opponent forward, gushing blood, ripping flesh, and all in a day's work. The fight had no particular grace, only fury, only anger, and the night sky- a witness, and all in a day's work. His opponent hit him twice, shattering bones, and crushing muscle, but he had to stay strong, losing, could make everything go wrong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/24/2009 8:54:00 AM
the poet never a looser,the poet is a fighter indeed-smile;-)
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:29:00 AM
Amazing write. The metaphors used made the piece come alive with force. Wonderful!
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