Days Turn To Weeks

It started with a glance
But I had no clue
I'd end up liking you
The way I do

Like a rainy day
I'd love to stay
In your golden grace
Your nonobjective space
This warmth from your smile
Keeping me all this while
In awe that someone like you
Can be attracted to me too
Im just a freezing day
In the dark of a cave
Your that shining light
That makes everything right

Your cool and fun and cute
Your into what I'm into
What more could I ask for
Everything I want is in you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Willis Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 3:26 PM
I really liked this, I don't know if this is totally free verse, I sensed some rhyme in there as well and enjoyed it. The only thing is I thought the ending could have been stronger.
Lemens Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 9:46 AM
its the sweetest poem ive ever read.
Chircop Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 4:52 PM
good luck with the one you want,nice sweet poetry-i like it-charma
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