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Days Turn To Weeks

It started with a glance But I had no clue I'd end up liking you The way I do Like a rainy day I'd love to stay In your golden grace Your nonobjective space This warmth from your smile Keeping me all this while In awe that someone like you Can be attracted to me too Im just a freezing day In the dark of a cave Your that shining light That makes everything right Your cool and fun and cute Your into what I'm into What more could I ask for Everything I want is in you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/25/2010 3:26:00 PM
I really liked this, I don't know if this is totally free verse, I sensed some rhyme in there as well and enjoyed it. The only thing is I thought the ending could have been stronger.
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:46:00 AM
its the sweetest poem ive ever read.
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:52:00 PM
good luck with the one you want,nice sweet poetry-i like it-charma
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