Days of the Week

Monday, wake up feeling jaded, Tuesday, try to see what's true Wednesday feeling more persuaded- For Thursday's new point of view Friday seeming more degraded Saturday, question what I knew And Sunday: look what I created! A week I've sadly misconstrued...

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/14/2013 5:13:00 PM

LInda This is a cute and creative way to describe the way most people feel about the week. I vote for saturday/sunday Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/15/2013 5:42:00 AM

Hi, Robin. You've confused me with Linda again; it's me, Chan aka ArchaicPoet. That's ok. Hope you still feel the same way about the poem, regardless lol ;)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/24/2013 1:33:00 PM

Enjoyed with my coffee..Im stuck on Saturday...lol. BG

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/24/2013 1:42:00 PM

Thanks, Barbara :)

Linda Jackson

Date: 8/24/2013 11:36:00 AM

I like this poem, it has humour. Best wishes Linda x

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/24/2013 12:02:00 PM

:) Thanks, Linda