Days of Our Lives (Senryu)
On their wedding day
“The Days of Our Lives” was played
Congregation laughed
© Joseph, 9/20/07
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I wrote this while attending a wedding. This is serious! lol! The traditional or
classic Japanese senryu format has three lines: the first has
five syllables, second has seven syllables and the third five syllables. The
pattern is 5/7/5 for a total of seventeen syllables. The senryu is generally about
an emotional expression.
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