Days of My Life

These are the days of my life.
Where my generation is 
blinded by fraudulent 
misrepresentation,
And where many are fooled by 
foolish pride.
It brings a tear to ones eye to 
revolve around bestfriends and 
relatives whose hearts is fake.

Loyalty shouldn't but can be 
bought, and skeptical 
perspectives are inclined to 
misguide your potentials
Due to the fact that their 
failures amplify your 
progression.

Those who criticize shouldn't 
brake your spirits instead 
should solidify compelling you 
to epitomize what they lack in.
Nevertheless, embracing your 
youth and wisdom can lead to 
propelling your notions and 
reengineer them into triumph. 
Just as long as you persevere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 11, 2012 at 12:58 PM
I stopped back today to read more of your excellent poetry. Thank you for sharing and please continue to write and I will read them A. Love, Carol
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January 11, 2012 at 9:51 PM
Thanks for the compliment, And I will continue to write every chance I get
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