Days Long Past

In my mind I wonder,
to a place way back in time.
To a childhood filled with loneliness,
when my thoughts were all in rhythm.

The window where I'm watching,
a world of long ago,
is frosted now in coldness,
as darkness comes down just so.

The window of this memory,
is closed to all the world,
and only I can see it,
as in a hidden mural.

The music that I hear,
are sounds of by gone day.
They reach down in my heart,
and make me want to stay.

For those were the days of youth.
A time long ago in the past.
Days kept only in the memory.
A time that could not last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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September 16, 2026 at 6:02 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 10:49 PM
HELEN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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