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Days In the Thunder Where Everything Was Raw

You may one day remember the time you chose to forget You may remember we fought side by side my friend You may never remember the battle cry of war Those days in the thunder where everything was raw I hope that you remember how brave you were before They took your mind away in the cold theatre of war Goodbye my friend forever, for I can't live anymore They took a lot from us! Nothing's left for us no more. Goodbye my old friend, Goodbye, my comrade in war.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/24/2016 9:35:00 PM
Well done. Stay strong.
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A Yorkshire Poet
Date: 1/29/2016 6:45:00 PM
Hi Kelli, thanks very much. This was written as a mark of respect to soldiers who give everything and lose everything. Cheers.

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