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Day's End Peace

Dramatic dusk inviting Stay undaunted wait Effervescent stars begin Dramatic night's fate Eventide brings peace Simple breathtaking dimday When night sounds increase Inspired by Nette's contest

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Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/10/2012 7:02:00 AM

Simply breathtaking!

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 1:00:00 PM

just beautiful, my friend - enjoyed reading this one twice : )

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/6/2012 3:58:00 PM

Beautiful well-chosen words, Sara! Magical... hugs, Jack xox

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/4/2012 5:26:00 PM

enjoyed reading this lovely piece..!! jag

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/4/2012 3:00:00 PM

nice write Sara,lovely

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/4/2012 2:22:00 PM

i love the magic within this piece, sara.. not for my contest??.. love and huggs!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 2:01:00 PM

great title on this one and I loved that little phrase you made: dimday! About soupmail, Sara, I dont' know why it's a problem for you. I have no changes in the way I do Soupmail. I just have to click on a different place now to find it! Have you gone to inbox and seen it come up there? And you still can't use it? that is weird.

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/4/2012 10:48:00 AM

Very descriptive write about the end of each day.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/4/2012 9:39:00 AM

wonderful resting poem, Sara, so typical of your wondrous pen (Heart)

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 10/4/2012 12:54:00 AM

Such a calming vision of words!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2012 10:01:00 PM

lovely lines of dramatic dusk preview Sara .. winning wishes for Nette ..

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/3/2012 8:05:00 PM

Wow, Sara, you have written a true masterpiece here my friend! I really am in awe with the splendor of this write! I truly love every aspect of this poem, the whole feel of this write is beyond measure! I can't imagine you not winning first place in this contest! You deserve it, Great Work!!