Day's End Peace

Dramatic dusk inviting Stay undaunted wait Effervescent stars begin Dramatic night's fate Eventide brings peace Simple breathtaking dimday When night sounds increase
Inspired by Nette's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kovrlija Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 7:02 AM
Simply breathtaking!
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:00 PM
just beautiful, my friend - enjoyed reading this one twice : )
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Beautiful well-chosen words, Sara! Magical... hugs, Jack xox
Nair Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 5:26 PM
enjoyed reading this lovely piece..!! jag
Palmer Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 3:00 PM
nice write Sara,lovely
Onclaud Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:22 PM
i love the magic within this piece, sara.. not for my contest??.. love and huggs!..:)
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:01 PM
great title on this one and I loved that little phrase you made: dimday! About soupmail, Sara, I dont' know why it's a problem for you. I have no changes in the way I do Soupmail. I just have to click on a different place now to find it! Have you gone to inbox and seen it come up there? And you still can't use it? that is weird.
Pettit Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Very descriptive write about the end of each day.
Horsman Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:39 AM
wonderful resting poem, Sara, so typical of your wondrous pen (Heart)
Semeniuk Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 12:54 AM
Such a calming vision of words!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 10:01 PM
lovely lines of dramatic dusk preview Sara .. winning wishes for Nette ..
Sivey Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 8:05 PM
Wow, Sara, you have written a true masterpiece here my friend! I really am in awe with the splendor of this write! I truly love every aspect of this poem, the whole feel of this write is beyond measure! I can't imagine you not winning first place in this contest! You deserve it, Great Work!!
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