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Day's Delicious End

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~ a lemon drop sun melts sweet on the sky's pink tongue ... dusk's bib stained with plum ~ ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Mon-O" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "One Liner" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2020 2:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/16/2020 6:14:00 AM

Oh so beautifully evocative Greg. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/15/2020 4:44:00 PM

Vivid figurative language at its best, Greg. CONGRATS! Janice

John Watt

Date: 11/14/2020 5:46:00 PM

Tasteful and tasty imagery for your sunset write, Greg. Well done, and congrats ~ John

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2020 10:09:00 AM

A delicious and tasty way to end the day Gregory! Your images are so vivid and so visceral in sight and taste. Congratulations on your top win my friend. Hope you are doing well. A bounty of blessings to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2020 9:04:00 AM

wow, this is awesome, Greg. Mine was similarly themed and I did not get on the list at all!! Anyway, this image is scrumptious, Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2020 8:38:00 AM

Very colorful description. Way to go for this winner. Congrats. Sara

Ann Gilmour

Date: 11/14/2020 8:30:00 AM

Your words have just taken my breathe away so exquisite are they. Many congrats I love it & it's a FAVE ~ thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Carmael William

Date: 11/14/2020 5:57:00 AM

Amazing monoku.. Love Sophia

Carol Mitra

Date: 11/14/2020 5:47:00 AM

What an amazing image....Congrats on your win Gregory.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/14/2020 5:30:00 AM

Congrats on a top win and it's a great poem. God bless you

Md Johnson

Date: 12/28/2019 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations! Well done.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/27/2019 10:13:00 PM

Great imagery! Congrats!

Charles Messina

Date: 12/27/2019 4:11:00 PM

See.. your hard work pays off. Great write & win in the contest, Greg. Congratulations! PS: I'll SoupMail you later brother :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 12/27/2019 3:40:00 PM

This is such delicious imagery Gregory, I love it! So many congrats on your well deserved top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2019 2:15:00 PM

This is gorgeous, Greg, and I love lemon drops..congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve a

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/27/2019 1:58:00 PM

Awesome bouquet, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2019 1:17:00 PM

Wow at first place where it belongs. Congrats.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2019 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations. I can taste it and cherish it dripping down from nib to bib ...

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 12/27/2019 10:53:00 AM

Such a beautiful description! Great imagination!! Congratulations on your fully deserved win!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/27/2019 10:40:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations!

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2019 9:50:00 AM

You did not need the image... this is beautiful imagery in words.. Congrats on your first place in the contest..

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2019 12:22:00 PM

Lovely, colourful and creative, Greg! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2019 8:29:00 AM

Beautiful imagery! Congrats, Greg, on your win in my contest!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/23/2019 7:29:00 PM

I am positive that I've never seen / read so many fresh, vivid, imaginative turns of phrases in one line of poesy in my life! Bravo. A FAVE! :) gw