Gregory Richard Barden Poet Monoku

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Day's Delicious End

~     a lemon drop sun melts sweet on the sky's pink tongue ... dusk's bib stained with plum     ~







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Mon-O" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 1st Place ~  in the "One Liner" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

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Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2020 at 2:01 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler November 16, 2020 at 6:14 AM Oh so beautifully evocative Greg. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Janice Canerdy November 15, 2020 at 4:44 PM Vivid figurative language at its best, Greg. CONGRATS! Janice

John Watt November 14, 2020 at 5:46 PM Tasteful and tasty imagery for your sunset write, Greg. Well done, and congrats ~ John

Sam Kauffman November 14, 2020 at 10:09 AM A delicious and tasty way to end the day Gregory! Your images are so vivid and so visceral in sight and taste. Congratulations on your top win my friend. Hope you are doing well. A bounty of blessings to you.

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2020 at 9:04 AM wow, this is awesome, Greg. Mine was similarly themed and I did not get on the list at all!! Anyway, this image is scrumptious, Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick November 14, 2020 at 8:38 AM Very colorful description. Way to go for this winner. Congrats. Sara

Ann Gilmour November 14, 2020 at 8:30 AM Your words have just taken my breathe away so exquisite are they. Many congrats I love it & it's a FAVE ~ thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Carmael William November 14, 2020 at 5:57 AM Amazing monoku.. Love Sophia

Carol Mitra November 14, 2020 at 5:47 AM What an amazing image....Congrats on your win Gregory.

Regina Mcintosh November 14, 2020 at 5:30 AM Congrats on a top win and it's a great poem. God bless you

MD Johnson December 28, 2019 at 7:27 PM Congratulations! Well done.

Juliet Ligon December 27, 2019 at 10:13 PM Great imagery! Congrats!

Charles Messina December 27, 2019 at 4:11 PM See.. your hard work pays off. Great write & win in the contest, Greg. Congratulations! PS: I'll SoupMail you later brother :)

Ann Gilmour December 27, 2019 at 3:40 PM This is such delicious imagery Gregory, I love it! So many congrats on your well deserved top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper December 27, 2019 at 2:15 PM This is gorgeous, Greg, and I love lemon drops..congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve a

Line Gauthier December 27, 2019 at 1:58 PM Awesome bouquet, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2019 at 1:17 PM Wow at first place where it belongs. Congrats.

Kai Michael Neumann December 27, 2019 at 12:42 PM Congratulations. I can taste it and cherish it dripping down from nib to bib ...

Krish Radhakrishna December 27, 2019 at 10:53 AM Such a beautiful description! Great imagination!! Congratulations on your fully deserved win!!

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2019 at 10:40 AM Beautiful! Congratulations!

Silent One December 27, 2019 at 9:50 AM You did not need the image... this is beautiful imagery in words.. Congrats on your first place in the contest..

Paul Callus January 24, 2019 at 12:22 PM Lovely, colourful and creative, Greg! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues January 24, 2019 at 8:29 AM Beautiful imagery! Congrats, Greg, on your win in my contest!

Gershon Wolf January 23, 2019 at 7:29 PM I am positive that I've never seen / read so many fresh, vivid, imaginative turns of phrases in one line of poesy in my life! Bravo. A FAVE! :) gw

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