Probir Gupta Poet Verse

Days

Days we spend are lovely 

Dances we do pretty

Daggers unsheathed sometimes

Downpour intervenes then

Distress becomes eustress

Dews come on silken leaves

Delightful days come back
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28/8/2016:For Pleiades D Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman: Syllables checked with www.howmanysyllables.com

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Kamran Rashid September 4, 2016 at 12:53 PM as i had heard before ,, witnessed that by looking around into some of your poems...Wisdom lies in words too.!! thanks for your prayers and concern Probir Gupta September 5, 2016 at 5:36 AM I do not quite understand ... Any way, thanks for your kind visit and the observation ... Of course wisdom-laden words step in poetry ... Doesn't wisdom sprout when you say, it is all about roads and ruins ...?

Kim Merryman September 1, 2016 at 8:17 PM Probir, congrats on your win with this creative Pleiades! Blessings! Probir Gupta September 2, 2016 at 12:24 AM Thank you so much, Kim, for the your wonderful contest and for liking my poem too ...

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 5:06 AM - Back to congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta September 1, 2016 at 5:10 AM Thank you Anne ...

Connie Marcum Wong September 1, 2016 at 1:00 AM I love how this comes full circle ending on a positive note! Congratulations on your win Probir! ; ) Probir Gupta September 1, 2016 at 5:07 AM So intelligently interpreted, Viv. Thanks ... Love ... Probir Gupta September 1, 2016 at 5:03 AM Thank you Connie ...

Viv Wigley September 1, 2016 at 12:42 AM Love and hate, Yin and yang, a fine write, Probir, well done! Regards, Viv Probir Gupta September 1, 2016 at 5:16 AM Sorry for the inadvertently pressed key posting my acknowledgement in Connie's space ... However, Thank you ... Love ...

Eve Roper August 30, 2016 at 6:40 PM wonderful, Probir, good luck in the contest :) I would love the delightful days to come back.. with lots of blessings Hugs Eve Probir Gupta August 31, 2016 at 6:43 AM Thank you, Eve ...

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2016 at 3:19 PM It's like the circle of life, or friendship! Nice. Probir Gupta August 31, 2016 at 6:44 AM Thank you for the interpretation ...

Pashang Salehi August 29, 2016 at 10:55 AM Very nice... Good luck. Probir Gupta August 30, 2016 at 3:58 AM Thank you ...

Connie Marcum Wong August 29, 2016 at 6:27 AM Your poetry always impresses Probir. I loved this emotive pleaides! 7 ; ) Probir Gupta August 29, 2016 at 9:13 AM Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2016 at 4:51 AM - Lovely and delightful, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta August 29, 2016 at 9:13 AM Thank you ...

Casarah Nance August 28, 2016 at 5:23 PM Many layers of D make for a dynamic write. Probir Gupta August 29, 2016 at 9:16 AM Thank you so much for an off beat assessment ...

Sunita U.D Palawon August 28, 2016 at 1:27 PM The alliteration sounds nice...Well written:) Sunita Probir Gupta August 29, 2016 at 9:16 AM Thank you for listening to ...