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Days we spend are lovely Dances we do pretty Daggers unsheathed sometimes Downpour intervenes then Distress becomes eustress Dews come on silken leaves Delightful days come back ________________________________________________ 28/8/2016:For Pleiades D Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman: Syllables checked with www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 9/4/2016 12:53:00 PM
as i had heard before ,, witnessed that by looking around into some of your poems...Wisdom lies in words too.!! thanks for your prayers and concern
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/5/2016 5:36:00 AM
I do not quite understand ... Any way, thanks for your kind visit and the observation ... Of course wisdom-laden words step in poetry ... Doesn't wisdom sprout when you say, it is all about roads and ruins ...?
Date: 9/1/2016 8:17:00 PM
Probir, congrats on your win with this creative Pleiades! Blessings!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/2/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim, for the your wonderful contest and for liking my poem too ...
Date: 9/1/2016 5:06:00 AM
- Back to congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/1/2016 5:10:00 AM
Thank you Anne ...
Date: 9/1/2016 1:00:00 AM
I love how this comes full circle ending on a positive note! Congratulations on your win Probir! ; )
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Date: 9/1/2016 5:07:00 AM
So intelligently interpreted, Viv. Thanks ... Love ...
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Date: 9/1/2016 5:03:00 AM
Thank you Connie ...
Date: 9/1/2016 12:42:00 AM
Love and hate, Yin and yang, a fine write, Probir, well done! Regards, Viv
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/1/2016 5:16:00 AM
Sorry for the inadvertently pressed key posting my acknowledgement in Connie's space ... However, Thank you ... Love ...
Date: 8/30/2016 6:40:00 PM
wonderful, Probir, good luck in the contest :) I would love the delightful days to come back.. with lots of blessings Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/31/2016 6:43:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 8/30/2016 3:19:00 PM
It's like the circle of life, or friendship! Nice.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/31/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you for the interpretation ...
Date: 8/29/2016 10:55:00 AM
Very nice... Good luck.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/30/2016 3:58:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/29/2016 6:27:00 AM
Your poetry always impresses Probir. I loved this emotive pleaides! 7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/29/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/29/2016 4:51:00 AM
- Lovely and delightful, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/29/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/28/2016 5:23:00 PM
Many layers of D make for a dynamic write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/29/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for an off beat assessment ...
Date: 8/28/2016 1:27:00 PM
The alliteration sounds nice...Well written:) Sunita
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/29/2016 9:16:00 AM
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