Judy Konos Poet Rhyme

Days

On Days we arise and head straight to work 
Regarding the paycheck a worthiness perk 
Other days are just daze to figure out love
where we try to fit in and become a part of

The caring and sharing that life often brings
deriving our happiness from such little things
like a kiss in the morning caress in the night
The Days are for living and getting life right!

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Skat A May 3, 2015 at 9:27 PM Judy, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~

Jan Allison May 3, 2015 at 5:44 PM Many congrats Judy I didn't get time to write for this one:-) Hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs May 3, 2015 at 4:25 PM Days of life, congrats!

Joseph May May 3, 2015 at 3:26 PM A lovely write Judy...Congrats on your win

Olusegun Arowolo May 3, 2015 at 2:03 PM Lovely piece,Judy...Congrats on your win..

Laura Leiser May 1, 2015 at 5:09 PM I like this perspective about days, Judy! Great write, and good luck in the contest :)

Edwin Hofert May 1, 2015 at 1:25 PM A 7. A nice reminder of what's so easily overlooked and taken for granted day to day. <3 Ed

Emile Pinet May 1, 2015 at 10:31 AM The delivery and the flow are good carrying your thoughts to completion within its structure. Emile. Judy Konos May 1, 2015 at 11:54 AM Thanks Emile...appreciate your comment....

M. L. Kiser May 1, 2015 at 8:41 AM That's a good one; so true.

Jan Allison April 29, 2015 at 2:46 PM wise words indeed - trying to find a happy balance is the key Judy - great write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Kp Nunez April 29, 2015 at 12:08 PM Ah, such sweet flow of the rhythm and rhyme depicting what can is anyone's day. If this is for the contest, goodluck, Judy! Kim :)