Daylilies

bright orange Lilies
shine like stars in the green grass
         night's sky in the day


Heidi Sands

7/12/18

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Robertina B.

July 30, 2018 at 9:02 AM

A beautiful haiku, Heidi.. Terrific imagery! I love lilies. . Warmest wishes to you!

Heidi Sands

July 30, 2018 at 10:54 AM

Thank you Robertina :)

Barry Stebbings

July 13, 2018 at 2:08 PM

I have these in my garden, Heidi, exactly as you describe. // Barry.

Heidi Sands

July 13, 2018 at 2:16 PM

Oh, that's nice to hear Barry. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

M. L. Kiser

July 13, 2018 at 10:58 AM

Yet another fav...there's so many great pieces on here, today. Thanks for the fab read.

Heidi Sands

July 13, 2018 at 11:15 AM

Thanks so much M.L. :)

Charlie Smith

July 13, 2018 at 9:50 AM

Lovely Heidi...

Heidi Sands

July 13, 2018 at 10:07 AM

Thank you Charlie :)

Jan Allison

July 12, 2018 at 4:43 PM

such gorgeous imagery, i love lilies of any sort Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2018 at 5:34 PM

Thank you Jan ! :)

Tom Cunningham

July 12, 2018 at 4:21 PM

Night sky in the day, lovely hakiu Heidi.

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2018 at 4:34 PM

Thanks so much Tom :)

Vijay Pandit

July 12, 2018 at 4:17 PM

Colorful, scenic poem..a wonderful haiku, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2018 at 4:34 PM

Thank you very much Vijay :)

Joseph May

July 12, 2018 at 3:28 PM

Lovely haiku Heidi..

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2018 at 3:30 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Daniel Turner

July 12, 2018 at 3:12 PM

That would be a whole bunch of flowers Heidi. Lovely imagery:)

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2018 at 3:19 PM

Yes, it sure would be. However, the shape of them resembles a star too :) Thank you DT!:)

Arturo Michael

July 12, 2018 at 3:08 PM

A carpet sky display of colors...Nice imagery Heidi...All the best

Heidi Sands

July 12, 2018 at 3:18 PM

Yes Arturo...and the shape of them are like a star too. Thank you :)

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