DAYLIGHT SPRING TIME COMES AGAIN

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Daylight Spring Time Comes Again…

Tonight, the dark sky again

only slept a short while;

no longer eager to cheat

its sun’s awakening joy

over the horizon’s realm;

Bulky white yawning clouds

hovered over the night-shaded

ground below as small nocturnal

creatures seemingly scurried into

and out of the dawning day;

A dawning day during which

we shall seek to see justice

and peace become realities

in a world wrought with chilled

fear and misery:

May new spreading sunshine

sweeps away waning darkness of winter as

flowering hope again welcomes a new spring

toward resurrected liberation and equity:-

Tonight, the dark sky again only slept a short while; no longer eager to cheat its sun’s awakening joy over the horizon’s realm; Bulky white yawning clouds hovered over the night-shaded ground below as small nocturnal creatures seemingly scurried into and out of the dawning day; A dawning day during which we shall seek to see justice and peace become realities in a world wrought with chilled fear and misery: May new spreading sunshine sweeps away waning darkness of winter as flowering hope again welcomes a new spring toward resurrected liberation and equity:-

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/17/2025 7:35:00 AM

Hello Millard, I loved your vision of spring, not just in nature but in the world, even in the hardest of times, there’s always the possibility of renewal, of liberation. It’s beautiful to think of hope flowering again, as it always does, no matter how long winter lingers. Dawn is always coming, and there’s always a reason to look forward to it. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Millard Lowe
Date: 3/17/2025 5:04:00 PM

Daniel, thanks for the beautiful onederful oneness of the onement of poetic mind, in the profound encouraging feedback. Much appreciated! And thanks for the blessings. ONE. Peace and Love.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2025 4:11:00 PM

Creative lines penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Millard Lowe
Date: 3/17/2025 5:00:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. I'm pleased this write resonated with you. Thanks for the inspiring feedback. ONE. Peace and Love.