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Once only robbers wore masks … now I can’t go in my bank without one! 04/16/21

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Date: 5/16/2021 7:01:00 PM
Great me too! observation And we are suspicious of the character in the bank without a mask
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Date: 4/21/2021 11:53:00 AM
:) and they serve you as per demand, without having to threaten them with a gun!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/20/2021 2:21:00 PM
Absolutely Brilliant Jan Love this and thought it myself Frankly quite suprised crime and criminality hasn't flurished under these conditions
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Date: 4/19/2021 11:40:00 AM
The fright one gets when a gun is pointed at you, both Elias and I were held up in our driveway because we didn't close our gate quick enough, in a slit second we had guns at each of our head. God was truly in control of our lives that day. very enjoyable and oh, so true. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/20/2021 2:23:00 PM
Sad but true what Jen here said Living in S.A this is more likely to happen and occur than not sadly
Date: 4/17/2021 11:06:00 PM
Even with a mask is easy to spot a Wolf...........
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:48:00 PM
I've seen a shark back on soup but that's another story lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/17/2021 12:35:00 PM
- I would use a mask anyway ... my bank account is empty :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:48:00 PM
thanks my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/17/2021 12:00:00 PM
In Hawai'i, people have been wearing face masks for more than one year. Seen without a face mask, their "white beard" looks like they are still wearing one . ..... Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:47:00 PM
lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/17/2021 7:07:00 AM
Now, ain't it true, great one-liner, Jan:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:47:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 11:08:00 PM
Wonder if there has been any robberies all wearing a mask. Happy weekend.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:46:00 PM
I wonder Victor!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 10:52:00 PM
Lol! Jan, That is true; I wouldn't leave home without it. I enjoyed the read. Have a good:-) Alexis
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 5:54:00 PM
Such are the times we live in. Have a great day my friend.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2021 5:45:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment David:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 4:04:00 PM
lol, You still got it Jan, it never ends, and I'm glad that it doesn't, Hope your keeping well. Much love :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2021 5:29:00 AM
thanks Vie, we come out of lockdown on Monday but i suspect in time we will be wearing the masks for some time to come hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 3:33:00 PM
good one, Jan ~
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 1:39:00 PM
That’s mad Jan, and brilliant, I made a comment to a guy the other day who passed me in the shopping mall, he had a baseball hat on and a mask, with a crowbar in his hand, I said you gonna rob the bank, he just said och aye in a northern accent and laughed, he was doing work in a some shop, I think, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/17/2021 4:08:00 AM
I’ve only been to the one funeral myself, under lockdown restrictions, thank god, it really is very sad, doesn’t seem to do the memory of the person any justice, with such limited numbers allowed, I wish you well Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2021 3:41:00 PM
been a tough day with a socially distanced funeral with 9 mourners - its the first one we have been to in lockdown (went to about 5 last yr when we had no restrictions) hugs Jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/16/2021 3:24:00 PM
We must keep our humor at all cost, I’m busy enough so it helps break the monotony, hope your managing to keep sane, the soup is a great release cheers David
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2021 2:49:00 PM
I wrote a limerick on the same subject (about 10 days ago) but it still doesn't scan well so i thought i'd just done a one liner, Hope all is good with you:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2021 1:36:00 PM
Lol, surreal isn't it, think we'll be wearing them for some time to come Jan. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2021 2:47:00 PM
I dont mind wearing them now, we go out of lockdown on Monday but can see the day when we will have to wear masks and distance again - i can see mum on Monday but have to distance - so near yet so far... i have to wear a mask so she will find it hard to hear me even with her hearing aid on, but these are the rules for now so i have to go with it, hugs jan xx

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