Daylight Full of Night

How can this daylight be full of night

and the globe deflate on this unreliable plight

because yesterday above the roses the sun had hung bright

all the joy now seems out of sight, out of lives

the world is doomed in this nightlight

for the day hasn't come in years and never might

All men pray, children fly kite

oblivious of the end in this mythical light

End of love, end of the world, end of the daylight

trusting this imitation by few Antichrists

Men may die overwhelmed by regret and fright

That they had never seen the daylight

Because the days of darkness were not days but nights

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/10/2015 4:56:00 PM
WOW, the ending line is awesome... Akanksha, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/8/2015 1:25:00 PM
Your first line reminded me of Daystar a poem I posted yesterday but wrote when I began my career from a perspective of God to me. I welcome you here to poetry soup, Akanksha. All experiences good or bad have educational value for good poems.
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Akanksha Rai Sharma
Date: 12/10/2015 3:30:00 AM
thank you for the warm welcome :-)
Date: 12/8/2015 1:15:00 PM
Akanksha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Akanksha Rai Sharma
Date: 12/10/2015 4:25:00 AM
Hi SKAT ! I am overwhelmed by the welcome I have received from you and fellow poets. It is truly amazing to be a part of this community. I am 20 years old student from India, pursuing Bachelors in Technology. I am passionate about writing poems and learning different languages . I know french and a little bit of Spanish. Presently, I am learning Arabic ;-)Lastly, I am glad to be associated with you.I really like your work :-*
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