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Daylight dwindles, and as darkness descends night awakens; clouds of hungry bats take flight, hunting moths fluttering in the pale moonlight before Dawn ushers in daybreak. Dew, like a trillion teardrops, falls right on cue and ebony supplants a sky of blue; the horizon blushes a scarlet hue and unveiled stars start twinkling above.

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Date: 7/5/2021 6:07:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and love the use of alliteration, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/5/2021 6:14:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, I appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/4/2021 9:54:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/5/2021 6:15:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/9/2021 12:26:00 PM
Another exquisite poem from your pen, Emile. I know these aren't easy to write, so applause for you. Best wishes in Joseph May's contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

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