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Daylight

The sun rising tracks night's arc yet to be, hidden dreams stirring, seeded star and moon.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/28/2024 5:51:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Gary Onderisin
Date: 5/29/2024 2:36:00 AM

thanks for your feedback, beata. thanks for your kindness. i very much appreciate it. best wishes, gary