Daylight

The sun rising


tracks night's arc yet to be,


hidden dreams stirring, seeded star 


and moon.
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Agustin Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Onderisin Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 2:36 AM
thanks for your feedback, beata. thanks for your kindness. i very much appreciate it. best wishes, gary
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