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Dark foreboding billows,
dampening the euphoria of a day's treasure.
The earth frowns at our childlike dimness...

02/19/2018
Sunshine and Showers Contest
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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2019 11:04:00 AM

I keep clicking on poems of yours and can't seem to find a new one to comment on, but seeing this one again, I have to tell you it is such a great little poem.Especially in light of how things are these days. (I am taking it with a deeper meaning and hoping that is what you intended). i came here also to say thanks for your comment at Carolyn's blog for me. Thanks so much.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/16/2019 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2018 4:13:00 PM

I love the rain and it is indeed a blessing. I enjoyed your insightful poem Charlie. I am able to finally post again. Hugs, Connie xxoo

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/10/2018 12:15:00 PM

Sooo glad Connie, thank you...

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/13/2018 10:38:00 PM

A poem of beauty in imagery and thought provoking content, Charlie. Your poem is intriguing and compelling in depth and meaning.. it deserves to be lingered over.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/14/2018 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Susan...

David Smith

Date: 3/10/2018 12:47:00 AM

You have produced a nice piece for us to mull over Charlie. Well penned and on the button. Sorry I have not checked on your work for a while. Regards David in NZ

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/10/2018 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for the visit David...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2018 9:24:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Such a short poem and yet so deep. A wonderful write for the contest. I hope it does really well for you. An excellent write my friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/6/2018 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Mike...

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/22/2018 11:43:00 AM

I liked this one Charlie !! On a dark day, and then our own dimness.....the interesting underlying texture of your poem is marvelous! Nicely done!

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/22/2018 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Carrie...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2018 5:31:00 PM

very nicely concisely done, Charlie. I too opted for a "short way" on this theme!! I just don't have the huge imagery in my head that some of the entries I've been seeing have portrayed. Your imagery is really good in this short poem.

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/20/2018 11:27:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...