Daydreams

Distance there in space unclaimed
Lay a barren desert drought
A phantom sea there drifts unnamed
Eyes stare in untamed thought
Nothing ever comes in view
All thoughts just pass from sight
Void of thinking thoughts anew
Rest there in daytime’s night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Davis Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:06 AM
A sweet write, indeed :-)
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 3:32 PM
This is a very interesting piece! The rhyme is wonderful.. take care..
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 6:12 AM
WOW - daydreams in dreamland....wery good Ricard.OXOX love Anne-Lise
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