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Daydreams

Down where azalea blooms linger Creek's rhythm leads bird the singer After the storm exposed gnarled, twisted roots Swiftly creek's water still runs, love We could float to the gulf, dove Better to be freed altogether though Strong wings lift the spirit to heights. We never dreamed in our times of flight. Again, let down, our dreams dissipate
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Date: 4/4/2023 11:55:00 AM
Sara, that was a beautiful poem you wrote. At some time, dreams will end, but before it does, they will have left you with some stray thoughts.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2023 1:40:00 PM
Thank God for the lasting thoughts. I am delighted that you stopped by. Sara
Date: 4/4/2023 9:36:00 AM
Great verse, Sara:) dreams have to dissipate sometimes, but at least they left you with musings:)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2023 1:35:00 PM
Yes, I appreciate being left with some musings. Thank you for dropping by. Sara
Date: 4/4/2023 6:37:00 AM
- "Strong wings lift the spirit to heights" ... dreams that are destroyed ... great written, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2023 1:31:00 PM
Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the thoughtful review. Sara
Date: 4/3/2023 1:38:00 AM
You captured a great daydream.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2023 3:55:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. SK
Date: 4/2/2023 6:09:00 PM
The weather does break loose some creeks or melting snow to show the erosion of the land besides take some of it with it. Great verse, enjoyed reading.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2023 3:34:00 AM
Eve, Yes, some trees are always taken down that have been holding on for years. Thank you for your kind review of my work. Sara
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