Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Daydreams

   Down where azalea blooms linger
Creek's rhythm leads bird the singer
After the storm exposed gnarled, twisted roots

Swiftly creek's water still runs, love
We could float to the gulf, dove
Better to be freed altogether though

Strong wings lift the spirit to heights.
We never dreamed in our times of flight.
Again, let down, our dreams dissipate  

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Howard Kerr December 18, 2025 at 4:44 AM Hello Sara, This is a profound, philosophical work that stimulates both the mind and imagination. On reflection it speaks volumes. I’m most grateful for your thoughts on my profile, Howard Sara Kendrick December 18, 2025 at 6:24 AM Thank you, Howard. I am glad that it stimulated your mind and imagination. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara K

Sotto Poet April 4, 2023 at 11:55 AM Sara, that was a beautiful poem you wrote. At some time, dreams will end, but before it does, they will have left you with some stray thoughts. Sara Kendrick April 4, 2023 at 1:40 PM Thank God for the lasting thoughts. I am delighted that you stopped by. Sara

Joanna Daniel April 4, 2023 at 9:36 AM Great verse, Sara:) dreams have to dissipate sometimes, but at least they left you with musings:) Sara Kendrick April 4, 2023 at 1:35 PM Yes, I appreciate being left with some musings. Thank you for dropping by. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2023 at 6:37 AM - "Strong wings lift the spirit to heights" ... dreams that are destroyed ... great written, Sara :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 4, 2023 at 1:31 PM Why, thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the thoughtful review. Sara

Victor Buhagiar April 3, 2023 at 1:38 AM You captured a great daydream. Sara Kendrick April 3, 2023 at 3:55 AM Thank you, Victor. SK

Eve Roper April 2, 2023 at 6:09 PM The weather does break loose some creeks or melting snow to show the erosion of the land besides take some of it with it. Great verse, enjoyed reading. Sara Kendrick April 3, 2023 at 3:34 AM Eve, Yes, some trees are always taken down that have been holding on for years. Thank you for your kind review of my work. Sara