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Daydreamer

"The Dream Manipulator"

A wish upon the stars I see
Magical moments with sweet surrenders
Embrace the twinkle notes
My lid slip into an everlasting feel~  In trance, I dream 

Candle wax drips with the night
Bejeweled with bloodshot posies
Lavander occupies scenery
A tune seductive and real~ In trance, I dream

In the country of warm fairy lights
I follow and listen to the echoes
Drifting around the moon's glow
Fog leaks under the new sky~ In trance, far from reality

Lost to the calmness
My physique belongs to the night
Giving life to an ordinary page
Faint away to your beating pulse~ In trance, I dream

Savoring the previous forecast.
The furnace kept warm
Motions moving from this curse
Sun-dance, away from the rain~ In trance, I dream

Suave lid pulls in the glow.
Soft memory fades away the feeling of yesterday
The day swings in a new journey
“DENIAL” is my choice of food~ In trance, I belong to my dream...

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Len Gasun November 7, 2013 at 4:54 PM Good morning my dearest sis! Stopping by to say Hi & send morning hugs. Thank u so much for your text messages last night. I woke up early this morning 'cuz I'll encode exercises/worksheets & at the same time peek here :)). The signal is better now. I'll prepare for schl after an hour. Have a wonderful day/time there! lovem4evr,Leo

Brooke Floyd September 16, 2013 at 7:59 AM I love your poem you use alot of vivid language.your poetry soup friend BROOKE FLOYD

Liam Mcdaid September 6, 2013 at 8:12 AM we wish in the stars sparkling beautiful piece

Kelly Deschler September 5, 2013 at 3:59 PM I am entranced by this dreamy poem! Loved it!... Sometimes, there is nothing I would rather do, but daydream. And, sometimes, daydreaming is all I can do!...Great poem, Linda!....You might like my poem, "Sanctum"...Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, once again. It is very much appreciated!

Mustapha Mohammed July 27, 2013 at 5:02 AM Beautifully woven Linda.Big hugs to you.

Kash Poet July 6, 2013 at 9:57 AM soupmail

Matthew Horstkotter June 8, 2013 at 11:43 AM Very nice poem.

Romeo D. Matshaba June 5, 2013 at 1:34 AM I thnk even man who r beauty impaired, cnot resist 2 c beauty in ur work!

Shadow Hamilton May 29, 2013 at 10:26 AM no doubt this is a 7 dreams are so important and I believe help to keep us sane. a flawless write Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 8, 2013 at 12:50 PM Outstanding deep write... Thanks for sharing ~A.O

Richard D Seal March 21, 2013 at 8:39 PM I live a great deal of my life in this state lol, so I can relate whole heartedly to this beautifully written poem. I'm still catchig up on your back pages, seems you're up to date on mine now, thank you very much, feel honoured. For you Dark One, I'll give you the nod on any new postings. Thank you once again and do take care. Regards Richard

Kazeem Musa March 20, 2013 at 2:47 PM Linda,I must say you are so deep in thoughts. Don't stop!

Len Gasun March 2, 2013 at 7:14 AM Yes, i said dinner my dearest sis. I just came back home. I decided to dine out and here, let's eat together! I wish you're joining me here too! ;))). How I wish someday (may my dreams come true) I could have breakfast or dinner together with my #1 idol and loving sis and friend! Enjoy your breakfast too my dearest sis! Sending you again my biggest sweetest smiles and morning loving embraces! take care and have a great day in sunshine! love much, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2013 at 12:48 AM hey, PD. it's so late and difficult to catch up here lately but just wanted to tell you hi and to say, wow, you are sure going gung ho with contests. Always a delight. You go, GIRL (btw, any word on Linda?? I feel a little worried about her.)

... Gigno February 14, 2013 at 5:46 PM !!!

Mehnaz Veetil January 31, 2013 at 9:56 AM deep and mesmerizing,...Hi Linda , saw your new avatar...catchy ;-) Mehnaz Veetil January 31, 2013 at 9:58 AM and thanks always for your kind visits and support on my page...

Sean L Sanders January 30, 2013 at 8:52 AM Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

Wayland Bunch January 23, 2013 at 7:58 PM You're so clever, this internalization dramatic yet beautiful. It always seems more dramatic in the moment, with hopes of achieving past greatnest in some aspect. I think I know the feeling. Wonderful poem that I need to read again.

Jim Pemberton January 21, 2013 at 5:27 PM Thank you for your thoughtful words! Always a blessing to hear from you! JP

Audrey Haick January 21, 2013 at 2:33 PM Love this, Linda. Thanks for reading my poem and the kind comment. I thank God that we can dream. That in itself is a way of surviviing. In a better time and place we will not need to dream, dear. Exceptional write. Love, Annalise

Pam Woolford January 13, 2013 at 8:57 AM Congratulations for being one of Poetry Soups best poets. When I read this poem about "daydreaming" I can so relate to it as sometimes I don't want to wake up from a wonderful dream. There is so much bad things happening in the world. It is nice to be able to escape into our dreams and shut out these things for a while anyway. I will read more. I'm sure. Love Pam.

Melani Udaeta January 10, 2013 at 8:50 PM Daydreamer is my Poetry Handle when I share on Facebook.. Hubby often says 'you daydreaming again?' Lol very beautiful :)

Vesna Kovrlija January 9, 2013 at 1:13 AM Excellent write!

Bukang Liwayway January 6, 2013 at 7:51 AM Excellent and superb write my friend PD..hand salute for being one of the great poet here on PS. I really appreciate and grateful for all your help and support to my poems, for your nice comments. Thank you so much!!You are one of my inspirations...about your baby contest..I already wrote 2 stanzas while going to work(inside the bus) last week..I will finish it next week (^_^) Have blessed day always. Hugs/Love, Maria

David Scott January 4, 2013 at 6:47 AM YES desire Ive always been filled with like your opattern it again remibnds me of your pink skys poem taking of dreams and dreaming Im working on poem at moment called r,e,m,s YOU DO INSPIER ME XXX DAVIDSCOTT HOPE YOU ARE WELL

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