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'My Song Two' Poetry Contest

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Daydream Melody

Daydream Melody

A song can bring love’s daydream melody,
adrift upon a cloud of make believe
and then a woman’s mind will float away,
on silver linings to her wedding day.

A song can bring kind daydream melodies
especially when it means a memory
has come to warm the heart with a caress
and say with time all things work out for best

A song can bring a daydream's gaiety,
and mask pure lies the heart cannot bear see.
For just a glimpse of truth would surely slay
romantic hopes that pray to have their way.

A song can lift you out of feeling blue
envisioning the good things two can do.
Remember what it says may not come true.
Reality belongs to only you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/20/2018 5:41:00 PM
nice poem Janis, i love the ending particularly
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Date: 5/9/2017 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Janis.
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Date: 5/9/2017 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Janis! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:38:00 AM
Janis, a 7 for this lovely WINNING poem! Thanks for entering my contest. Janice
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Date: 3/20/2017 1:35:00 AM
How apt and infinitely sad . You speak for millions of women whose dreams were crushed by the lies of romance. I know one too.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/20/2017 4:31:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/12/2017 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Janis on a well written poem and win:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/14/2017 1:31:00 PM
Thanks, Jo. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 3/11/2017 9:26:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/14/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 3/10/2017 9:20:00 AM
beautiful Janis....we have to pray they have their way...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thanks for my placement luloo. Great contest.
Date: 3/6/2017 10:44:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/7/2017 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Funom. Coming from such a talented writer as yourself, I am very honored by the comment. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 2/28/2017 9:57:00 PM
Insightful write. Anyone that has been in 'it's complicated', can relate to this poem. Good luck in the contest Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/7/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thanks rob. Life and love get very lovely and sad sometimes. Blessings, Janis
Date: 2/28/2017 12:28:00 PM
Well done Janis, best wishes in the contest...
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/28/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Blessings.
Date: 2/28/2017 5:54:00 AM
Nicely done Janis. This was beautiful and a little dark at the end.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/28/2017 12:38:00 PM
Well you know daydreaming about fantasies is sometimes deadly for the heart.
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