Daydream

DAYDREAM

Rainy April day
In the fog    drenched leaves drooping
All nature asleep
It’s Sunday morning o’clock
Kitchen dry    the coffee hot

An old hollow log
Mahogany in the wet
Lay in our backyard
My eyes hurry inside the gloom
Wonder    wandering
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 18, 2012 at 6:45 AM
This is beautiful, Daver! Love "an old hollow log, Mahogany in the wet":) That's so an acurate colour description! This is full of clever images...raining but "Kitchen dry..coffee hot" makes it feel so cozy and warm. Apparently no spider to keep you company.:)) Okay, I'm still giggling.:( Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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