Daver Austin Poet Tanka

Daydream

DAYDREAM

Rainy April day
In the fog    drenched leaves drooping
All nature asleep
It’s Sunday morning o’clock
Kitchen dry    the coffee hot

An old hollow log
Mahogany in the wet
Lay in our backyard
My eyes hurry inside the gloom
Wonder    wandering

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Ann Roske April 25, 2012 at 11:55 AM This sounds like home on most April Sunday's -this is a wonderful picture

Sara Kendrick April 18, 2012 at 3:01 PM I like the play on words in the last line..Enjoyed reading..I am glad that you enjoyed the rainy day and it had you wondering and wandering...Sara

Joe Maverick April 18, 2012 at 11:57 AM Its better to just let your eyes wander into the log Daver, the kitchen sounds the place to be; well at least to me.."