Daydream

Meandering memories 
move through my mind 
like a river flowing   
to the salty sea. 

Limbs stretch lazily 
reaching skywards 
like the gangling 
branches of an ancient tree. 

Standing still in 
the solitude of 
suspended time; 
lazily picking flowers,

the hours melt away 
as I daydream in 
the field of fantasy. 
Flicking fancy fecklessly. 

The rasping of the siren 
in the run of the mill 
over the hill startles me 
and I am roughly returned 

to normality, garishly. 
The harsh light of day 
refracts its neon rays; 
stinging rays destroying 

delicious serenity. 
Daydream done I am returned 
to Hurly Burly Street, 
and the hurrying feet 

running the relentless human race. 
Individuality lost 
without a trace in the 
salty sea of faces; 

fixed expressions as they 
cling on to the roof strap 
in the hurtling underground 
mundane.  Multitasking. 

Lost in the murky flow 
of commuter traffic 
which has become their life. 
Set me free again to daydream. 

Release from the race of rats 
we unintentionally run. 
I find some fun discarded 
in an overflowing bin 

and sneak it into my pocket. 
Around my neck a locket 
containing happiness 
and daydreams .....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/19/2010 12:05:00 AM
excellent write and so real
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Date: 2/6/2010 8:00:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!! This poem is amazing, eveybody should live in a dream state, for there lies true reality! love your way with words, love Simone
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:48:00 PM
Your poetry made excellent reading today Helen. Thank you for sharing. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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