Daydream

Ambient noise, the silent song of day,
TV static, and this high pitched ring.
Creating a vision through bloodshot eyes,
A vacant gaze meeting solemn void's stare.

Dreaming those vivid details as they play,
Savoring each moment and bitter sting.
Knotting and untangling all the ties,
From disposable camera that we share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Sinha Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 9:56 AM
This feels like a dream frozen in time—haunting yet beautiful. The static, the vacant gaze… it all lingers. Loved it!
Croteau Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Thank you! Haunting is a good word for the tone, I am glad you liked it! :)
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