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Driving north yesterday through hot searing haze, aroma of melting tarmac blending fresh cut grass - I got to thinking of you. I saw you playing cricket on Queen’s Park Savannah in tropic isles far far away. Got to thinking of us down Long Bay last summer. And as I changed gear slowing down for the lights, I thought I smelt... Sweet Briar. Written: circa 1995 ——— My cricket playing friend lived once upon a time on Sweet Briar Road.

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Date: 1/26/2022 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. I think the mind works with memories and or smells. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:01:00 PM
I have read your work that is on the winners' list and find it worthy of the placement. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
Craig, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this nostalgic write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/23/2022 7:08:00 AM
Beautiul work. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/22/2022 11:59:00 AM
An excellent poem. Great writing Craig. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/14/2022 8:21:00 PM
Marvelous memory triggered by smells...very nice!
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