Daydream

Once upon a time there was a girl
who dreamed of a fancy houses and a peaceful world
Blue, purple , and pink flowers along the street 
Right where night and day meet
The spray of fluffy white seeds from
dandelions sprinkle the air
Sweet spring breeze blowing through my hair
The soft touch of the sun against my face warms my nose
The unmistakable smell of a rose
I feel myself drifting to a daze
Daydreaming it'll be my turn someday
to go to the big city
Where the flashing lights and action show no pity
Or maybe the  islands
Drink pi na~colada until my body and relaxation make mends
Melting as a fine brother caresses  my hand
And takes me down the beach
As far as the sunshine will reach
Daydreams, night dreams
Let's wake up to see what my dreams will redeem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/30/2008 8:19:00 AM
Alesha - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 7:48:00 PM
Alesha - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/22/2008 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2008 6:14:00 PM
Awesome write here, Alesha .. reads almost like a Ballad ... smile ... glad you're at the Soup and congratulations on your writing being featured this week!
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Date: 10/19/2008 8:45:00 PM
Alesha congrats on having your poem featured this week - God Bless
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations Alesha on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:22:00 PM
Vivid imagery forwards your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2008 2:51:00 PM
Alesha - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Peace always, John
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